Friday, January 3, 2003

Evening Song Comments

Rating: 3.4

Sleep, McKade.
  Fold up the day. It was a bright scarf.
  Put it away.
  Take yourself to pieces like a house of cards.
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Kenneth Fearing
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M. Asim Nehal 17 March 2023

Nicely written Lullaby, very interesting one.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 March 2023

A mysterious poem! We can trace lullaby at the end. An outstanding composition... liked it

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 July 2016

Felt as if reading a mystery novel. Enjoyed the theme and flow of the write. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2016

This is a mystery, fairy tale and a lullaby- all in one. The narrative is captivating. Thanks. I quote: Sleep, McKade.... Yawn.... Go to sleep.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

Under the sod! Thanks for sharing.

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Kenneth Fearing

Kenneth Fearing

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