Gazing into a starry night,
I see a deep indigo sky
with perfect placement of twinkling light.
Stars reveal the expanse of time
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Well expressed thoughts in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, James.
Evening sky leads towards a starry sky. With deep trust you see the deep indigo sky. Existence comes with trust and twinkling light reveals time. This poem is very excellently penned that amazes mind. Divine creation is beautifully shared with us. This is very nice poem that motivates readers....10
such beautiful imagery which creates a vivid image and pays homage to our creator. My analysis could be wrong, but i love the way you allude to the scientific aspects of the universe as well as complement the creator. Well written indeed
Hi Joseph. Really enjoyed that. Good poem. Keep up the good work. Cheers Conor
Such a seemingly 'endless' subject - captured beautifully. I always gaze up at the sky when I take the dog out last thing at night - every night it's different - it always fills me with wonder and awe... A brilliant poem - thank you for sharing... take care. joey
We gain so much awareness from observation. To gaze in the 'Evening Sky' reminds me of the communication between stars and man! All that transpires has a timeless effect yet what is seen has happened so many light years ago. We remain there staring and absorbing. I like this poem very much. L
It's part of our heritage and His eternal legacy. This is the truth finely said at the end.
Beautiful and delightful, a pleasure to read. Just lovely. Love Ernestine XXX
"His eternal legacy" for you and me', seminal works, dear poet. Top score