Evening's Solitude Comments

These word are very wunderfull. eternity lies far ahead leaving love behind

passion waning like the moon, past passionate kiss .. with heaves and a sense of loss of the lost love..... that was what struck me as i read your poem. like the words and the images you used in this poem conveying the emoyions so well. thank u tony

the third stanza is the best... i can see it! wow, nice write!

beautiful autumn canvas...love eternal; yes, for those who could relish the values within...10

Hon’ble Poet Ma’am taken patent on poeming on final exit- separation - de - partment - dislodgement - cleavage…still the poetic melancholy calorie makes readers calorie oblivious [lolol]…will lead to gain of fatty knowledge and flabby joy by the readers…… thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

Ah sweet memories of young love dreaming under closed eyelids...solitude the time it all comes back...love the poem regards

So beautiful and reflective poetry Almedia and yet it leads into the future where dreams are waiting to be fulfilled. The love songs evoke a feeling of tenderness and deep love, even though passionate kisses, can become more companionable. Eloquent and moving writing. 10 love Karin

I enjoyed the controlled, quiet passion of this piece. Well done.

what a beautiful, passionate write indeed.. hey touched my heart.. Nice miss Knight.. you kept the poignant aspect through out.... good... loves shan

Reflective... tranquil… and yet, it breaks my heart… passionate kisses ought not ever be gone until the end and the kissers are gone.

lovely poem that leads one gently on to the last lines, and perahps into eternity...

Hi Almedia - a lovely evocative poem with just the right mixture of nostalgia and hope. Human love is transient and does wane (my wife and I are the same age as you!) but God's love is constant. When we all get to Heaven we shall all be changed we will mount up with wings like Eagles, we will run and not be weary (when did that last happen) we will walk and not faint. Keep looking up the Lord is surely there waiting for us all! God Bless - John. I'll give it 10!

Lovely piece Almedia...it brings much to think upon...it touches the reader on so many levels my friend...it's very well written...beautiful infact 10+++

in my evening's solititude..iam touched and sadly felt by your expressive poem

lovely poem reminds me of an old song 'evening shadows makes me blue' surely a tenner from me anjali (if time permits do read mine YOUR ALWAYS IN MY HEART)

love has different aspects to it...as u grow old, it unfolds many a new options and puts an end to many...honest, nice, lovely...