Evening Of Reflections Comments

I love the depth of meaning in this poem with it's great flow. Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

beautifull poem.sharp and short lines.meaningfull words.nice write.posted 10 surya

A fine poem. A fine expression. You are expressing the two sides of the same coin at different context. Life is an admixture of sorrow and happiness. Both are not static. Time is the great healer. At this age, I have come to the following view: - At one stage in our life we may have strong thoughts to transform this world but at a later stage, we will find that we are only witnesses to the transformation of the world. If we can accept life with all its diversity, it is well and good. Otherwise, the damage is only to ourselves and not to the world. This is what we have to understand. System always takes care of itself through various thoughts and views. The value system is somehow or ther being maintained. Otherwise, with all diversity,600 crores of people will not be living on earth.

Your work has an ease to its flow, lovely reflection, keep expressing 10