Monday, March 17, 2008

Evening Mood On A Tankship Comments

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Evening Mood (onboard a tankship))


The crew has had their evening meal
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jan oskar hansen
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Vincent James Turner 17 March 2008

There is a simplicity to this which i envy, there is much detail, much to take in and consider. The poem has a painting feel to it, as if i am observing it in a gallery. I love the ending it changes the theme of the poem, and makes me want to read it again. nice work best wishes Vincent

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