Evening Memory (Tanka) Comments

This poem is so quiet I felt like I was holding my breath. The past is slowly opening up: the pale face has to clear up, get stronger and sharper, and then the past will be present in the present. And perhaps you and the past person can finally talk things through. But the mood is fragile, you don't want to dispel it.

I am glad to see you embracing this form. You have done it justice

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Blurring the lines of present.... This is so nice to read. Well expressed.

Lost time relieved with this fantastic tanka.10++++