Friday, April 4, 2014

Evening Lamp! Comments

Rating: 3.6

Oh’Muse!
You appear at this cross-
Upon the rising flame of earthen lamp
Lighted- in my evening prayer,
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Deb Panda
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Prakash Sahoo 10 April 2024

Very good writing

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Prakash Sahoo 10 April 2024

Nice writing and keep it

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Nice writing in dark, Wise thought.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 December 2017

And I reserve this flame for ages- For my soul finds its temple, That will go down generation A lovely, brilliant poem nourished with divine bliss that sings the song of eternity. Loved it Deb, Thanks for the sharing. 10++++ Your fellow poet from the same place Subhas

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 11 September 2015

Truly, your flame is amazing and your poems will inspire a many

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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

...........great sketch painted with a pen.........may light of lamp show you way through dark.........lovely poem.....

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Amitava Sur 04 April 2014

A lovely imagery being drwn with a firm belief on almighty. I see you protect this pen; With the dazzling shield ....... enjoyd

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Hazel Durham 04 April 2014

Your muse takes away the darkness from your soul lighting the way with kindness and joy! Deep and beautiful write!

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Kamalesh Mohanta 04 April 2014

Hey Dev! It seems like I was lonely in the darkness, without the luster of ur poems. Hats off to your noble work. Meet our new generation poet.

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Patricia Grantham 04 April 2014

Very enlightening and amusing. Your muse lights up your darkness. See only great events! Nice.

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