Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Evening Is Chirping Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chirping, chirping, chirping
Evening flying west is chirping.
Sun is going to set at day end
Darkness calls us it does send.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Akhtar Jawad 02 October 2015

A marvelous description of evening that has been made for rest and recreation after a fatigue of a tiring day....10

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Savita Tyagi 30 September 2015

Pray God sure in pure mind right, Bright future we hope in flight. Enjoyed the poem with these lovely lines. Evening is time for reflection and rest and to be thankful for what we have. Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2015

With birds reaching their nests evening chirps. Beautifully described in the poem.

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Ramesh T A 29 September 2015

Day and night scenes are well said in this small poem ending in prayer to God for bright future to come!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 September 2015

After evening will come new light... Bright future we hope in flight. Every new day has hopes for every one and our life too draws hopes of better future.Nice poem.

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

An evening in Deogarh..........Liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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