Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Evening In Prison Comments

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evening...falls early in prison
in vain..even if you were a dragon
neither youre expertise in struggling
or your having a brave heart like a double edged fork
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Metin Sahin
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Unwritten Soul 15 February 2012

Beautifully done...and thanks for translating this nice poem.... Metin, we all know that live in prison told as live with physical wall around..it so boring and and feel down all the time..but it worst if we live not in cell but prisoner of fears...we isolating our own life with reality...prison can come in two, invisible or concrete visible...but one of them we can avoid and one of them we can escape because we have a key...in heart and believe_Unwritten Soul

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John Carse 14 February 2012

I enjoyed this very much. You really connect with your inner vision. Will read more of your work. Thank you and best regards.

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Dave Walker 14 February 2012

A really fantastic poem, like it. A. fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, A Seamless Life Line.

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