Saturday, September 15, 2012

Evening Hunger Comments

Rating: 4.8

When hunger came
I went to kitchen
Cooked rice
Made a soup of chicken
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
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Thomas Hsi 17 September 2012

Wow! You really know how to describe the 'under-belly' of living. The human condition in all its forms. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

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Terry O'leary 16 September 2012

Very nice image of the human condition... Terry

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Eric Cockrell 16 September 2012

we who walk the path always seek true companions!

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Poetheart Morgan 16 September 2012

The solitude is well described in your pen! ! ! is very difficult to deal with it every day,   then they come when they could, Friends.

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You are so natural... you are to give a different experience altogether over here. Thank you for the invitation.

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Smoky Hoss 15 September 2012

Very wise words. Good poem.

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Udaya R. Tennakoon

Udaya R. Tennakoon

Sri Lanka
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