Very, very light, light, good evening,
Twilight is glowing new fable is leaving.
You are father of heaven mercy light,
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Seen twice! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem, Kumarmani. Evening is a time for reflection, perhaps solitude, and gratitude. You capture its virtues beautifully.
Evening, so nicely described through beautiful words and lovely lines. Great work.
This is so beautiful in its flowing depiction of evening and then you bring in the Creator of all and it becomes even more beautiful. Outstanding!
I like the line, Evening is saying goodbye mind does cry. Thanks for sharing..
Peeling out chest of sky sun will hide soon, But we know by love you give kind boon. A good, good morning to you Kumarmani. I enjoyed the poem especially the last two lines and the concluding picture.
Fantastic poem followed by the aptly picture, all in all I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing..10+++
Twilight is glowing new fable is leaving. wisely write, thanks for sharing the poem with us
Sunset, though it portents darkness, is one of the most beautiful scenery on earth. I have nevertheless been tired of watching the sunset, wherever I have been. The best, of course is at Kanyakumari, where the confluence of all the three seas permit you to watch both Sunrise and Sunsets.