Thursday, September 7, 2017

Evening Good Evening Comments

Rating: 5.0

Very, very light, light, good evening,
Twilight is glowing new fable is leaving.

You are father of heaven mercy light,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Unnikrishnan E S 31 December 2019

Sunset, though it portents darkness, is one of the most beautiful scenery on earth. I have nevertheless been tired of watching the sunset, wherever I have been. The best, of course is at Kanyakumari, where the confluence of all the three seas permit you to watch both Sunrise and Sunsets.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2017

Seen twice! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2017

A wonderful poem, Kumarmani. Evening is a time for reflection, perhaps solitude, and gratitude. You capture its virtues beautifully.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 September 2017

Evening, so nicely described through beautiful words and lovely lines. Great work.

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Susan Williams 07 September 2017

This is so beautiful in its flowing depiction of evening and then you bring in the Creator of all and it becomes even more beautiful. Outstanding!

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 September 2017

I like the line, Evening is saying goodbye mind does cry. Thanks for sharing..

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Captain Cur 07 September 2017

Peeling out chest of sky sun will hide soon, But we know by love you give kind boon. A good, good morning to you Kumarmani. I enjoyed the poem especially the last two lines and the concluding picture.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2017

Fantastic poem followed by the aptly picture, all in all I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing..10+++

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Muzahidul Reza 07 September 2017

Twilight is glowing new fable is leaving. wisely write, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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