Evening Breeze Comments

You have so delightfully and fantastically delineated this poem on evening breeze as a women having cool and calm who can bring happiness to us and ripening mangoes to the children with joyful moment. Amusinging expression. Nice penmanship. Brilliant beginning. Impressive concluding. Ten from ten from me.

A summer evening is always romantic, so is the poem........................10

After the whole day's tiresome job when I return home, I love to have the evening breeze with all those qualities you briefed. It's a lovely poem with such detailing.

This is outstanding. Thanks for the treat.

your lines are like brush strokes. free but controlled. touch that holds sound, taste. taut.

Cool and soothing as the breeze.Loved.

..........it is a poem meeting all the five requisites of a good verse that meets the eyes to befriend the discerning mind later. This breeze has the touch of realism and the might of naturalism. Fine write, Madam Valsa

Beautiful poem Valsa - I can feel the breeze, though here in the UK it is blowing a gale right now! !

the beauty in poetic words in flow of cool - As she wings her way through mango groves Whistling and shaking the fruit laden boughs I love the writes

In the calm and cool evening breeze the impish visitor playing her tricks is enchanting! The beautiful poem has seized my heart! Great poesy which lightens the heart! THANKS!