Evening Breeze Comments

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful poem with beautiful rendition of words. Thanks for sharing.

Fantastic poem.well written Paul

, tranquil peace, calmness, aloneness as against loneliness....these are beautiful experience which lifts the soul up to God....... thank u dear poet. tony

The breeze carried the sorrow away Into the clouds that slid over the trees, Dew drops I see someone's tears in you. Such a lovely poem!

The imagery was really brilliant in this poem. Great poem! Congrats, and well deserved! ! 10+++

Life comes at you hard or easy but it's nice to have a safe haven in the soul..good poem

Serenity...thank you for sharing this remarkable poem with us, Paul...Congrats! 10++++++ Cheryl

The quietness absorbed all thoughts And carried me away to another place A place where everything was all right With no need for night; Beautiful. Amazing poem. 10.

I could also feel the same while reading this poem. Wind can set in a comfortable feeling and we will be carried away by gentle winds to unknown shores of time. Great. Happy to see the selection under the Member Poem.

Beautiful expression of a moment when a calm takes one over shadowing all the sorrows and perils of life. It is a cherished moment. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

The breeze carried the sorrow away Into the clouds that slid over the trees, Unexpectedly; And left me alone... is so beautiful. One gets lost to the effects of nature and takes relief in its charm. So nice.

This shows how best nature can influence a turbid mind. Mostly people do not recognize the potential, nature intrinsically has in soothing human mind, but you do. Very inspiring and soothing. Thanks for sharing a wonderful poem. X

The breeze carried the sorrow away.. Each new day the breeze takes away the new built sorrows Well written.. Finding Peace in nature..10

Superb. A moment of inspiration. This breeze heals the reader too. Congrats. Great pick of the day.10

a reflective poem of being aware that we alone choose the path we take in life? .............well written PGR.

It is a beautiful poem on life and nature having stunning expression. Thanks for sharing and congratualtion for being selected as the poem of the day.

Such a heartwarming poem....congrats for being selected...Rated 10+++++

I felt the greatness in the air, Just standing there; The quietness absorbed all thoughts And carried me away to another place A place where everything was all right With no need for night; Beautiful lines dear poet. Thanks for sharing. 10

From whence the sorrow? An evening breeze may not caress the air on each and every day through the seasons during which the leaves are on the trees, but I would suggest seeking medical help if each time the event occurs through half the year it lifts some weight from your burdened heart. Otherwise, more specificity is required such that it doesn't read as some Sisyphean entanglement of eternal woe, a generalized lament from which you find some recurrent relief from an arbitrary grief through an arbitrary event. Otherwise, the scene is nicely set.

Paul Gerard Reed, Ok you are so right; circumstances and even blinding pain experiences.........in the end it is a personal choice to keep moving mentally, emotionally. that everything that had happened, or that was going to be, was down to me, just me Right on! I say it and know it but to do it, not always so easy..........Great poem. You are a new poet to me and love first writings too.............Kathy