Friday, November 25, 2016

Evening Comments

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The evening sun so softly shines
No more in glaring noonday heat;
‘Twill soon go down beyond our view
Its journey done, its work complete.
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Malsawmi Jacob
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Malini Chongder 10 February 2018

Last two promising lines are overwhelming....beautiful poem mam...

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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2016

The poem beautifully unfolds the philosophy of life consummating in death just as the evening sun merges into night. Loved reading it. Thanks. The evening sun.... ‘Twill soon go down beyond our view Its journey done, its work complete.

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Malsawmi Jacob 26 November 2016

I'm so glad you like it.

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