Far off
a flight of swallows turn and
head with tinkle-bells
of carts, winding
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I love the description of the swallows and the women singing in the fields. This is a poem of tenderness and quiet that I really like.
I see this pastoral scene; quiet and unassuming with bells to break the monotony. I like this. Nice poem. L
This is lovely Tan. I think you use the free verse style very well. Warmly, Alison