Friday, February 3, 2006

Evening Comments

Rating: 4.3

Far off
a flight of swallows turn and
head with tinkle-bells
of carts, winding
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Tan Pratonix
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Alison Cassidy 13 May 2006

This is lovely Tan. I think you use the free verse style very well. Warmly, Alison

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Ronald Smith 10 April 2006

Very descriptive poem wonderful write.

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William Jackson 11 February 2006

I love the description of the swallows and the women singing in the fields. This is a poem of tenderness and quiet that I really like.

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David Darbyshire 07 February 2006

This one is nice, dave

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 February 2006

I see this pastoral scene; quiet and unassuming with bells to break the monotony. I like this. Nice poem. L

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