Tuesday, August 7, 2007

Evening Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even while I lay in the sun
I remembered Winter’s threat
and frozen tears.
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Don Pearson
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Fay Slimm 16 September 2008

Love the double-meaning of the title -; and the question at the end line is the all important surprise ending. A very good piece. fondlly from Fay with a tenner for this.

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