Friday, May 14, 2010

Even Though I Felt Sorry For Her Comments

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even though I felt sorry for her

Her smile was broken,
and upside down.
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Samuel Stuart Pennell
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Leonard Dabydeen 13 June 2010

A good write, Sam. Simple and short. And the imagery is powerful enough to make the reader explore with some empathy....'Her smile was broken, and upside down'....she was unhappy on the inside'.Good emotional flow. Thanks for sharing. Leonard

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Cassandra Robinson 17 May 2010

Wow, that was unique and touching. Sounds familiar!

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