Even Shakespeare Didn'T Learn How To Fly Comments

Very beautifully put, and a pleasure to read.

To bleed or not to bleed? ... That is the most unbearable question defined. Whether i suffer fro' sharpened pointy arrows slung real fast into thy side? ... Where among'st bushes or buildings may such i hide? Where for art thou sweet life cherished and saved? ... Do not hunt and haunt unto thee thy murderous depraved. Quest's of unimaginable quest's requires a much needed desires... Keep to thee thy ever burning fires of thy heart dismayed. Where hath thee fled out in thy darkness away of heartfelt displayed? .... Extinguish not thy heart yearned burned. Prudence and greed hath altered thy stand and need... Whence where shall i grieve for a sorrowed of breed? Give chase to thy heat's repairment twich need fast pushed to speed... That twas a great poem. Very inTENse. God bless all poets-MJG.