Friday, December 16, 2016

Even If My Mind Forget Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dont have to say sorry
Because you have to go
Dont keep your heart heavy
Because i want you always be light, be bright
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Unwritten Soul
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Captain Cur 01 September 2017

Soul, you write with great perception and depth of feeling. The notes you leave after your poems are a type of poetry in themselves. You are absolutely correct, no gene encodes for love. Love is universal.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

Dont have to let go the tears here Because it made me feel fear Dont have to say sorry to me Because kindness dont need apology.. .. yes, where there is kindness, where heart is vast wide open like immense sea there is needn't apology. And so also where there is tear there is possibility of fear. A heart touching poem shared. Thanks.

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Susan Williams 25 May 2017

Dont have to say sorry Because you have to go Dont keep your heart heavy Because i want you always be light, be bright- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A simple expression of love for a friend amd/or family member. What a tender and loving way to say good-by- -be it forever or just temporary. This has the rolling depths of repeating lines that make me think it was written as a song perhaps... that or a whisper of music underlines your verses in a very natural way. Well-done piece, Soul.

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Simone Inez Harriman 30 January 2017

Overwhelmingly beautiful my friend. So emotionally charged with the gentleness of spirit in every stanza.10++

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Rebecca Navarre 19 January 2017

Another Oh So Strikingly Deep! ! ! ! ! With Beauty And Feel! ! ! ! ! Your Words Flow Out So Strong! ! ! ! ! , Reaching Others In Heart Felt Song! ! ! ! ! Excellently Expressed Poem! ! ! ! ! Many, Many 10++++S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !

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Diane Montemayor 01 January 2017

Dear Sir Poet, Dont have to say sorry to me Because kindness dont need apology, , , i love this lines..wonderful... sincerely, diane

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Terry Craddock 25 December 2016

'Dont you worry Dont be sorry I'll be fine' short sharp parting liness, feelings cut us short, when words do not adequately express parting feelings

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Unwritten Soul 26 December 2016

I smell a gift from Santa, i'm not celebrating but still i got present! ho ho ho... Sometimes lil words can get us deep... best part of our life is to understand Thank you Terry, dont worry i am fine hahahaha

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Terry Craddock 26 December 2016

that is good, always make sure you take care of yourself, I left your chocolate under the tree, plus a spare in the frig :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2016

This hard time. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Muhammad Ali 20 December 2016

friend, if I say this is not a poem you wrote, but emotions splashed on the papers, you did nothing but was the medium between feelings and pen... am I wrong! nice to read dear.

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Unwritten Soul 20 December 2016

Thank you, i feel glad that if it was emotion and you felt it, means i did share this from my heart with you...There so much things i want to share but it just matter of time and space. Thanks dear :)

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Hans Vr 16 December 2016

The pain of goodbyes can really affect our hearts. Can really connect with the wisdom in this poem.

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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2016

Sometimes when we have to see people going, our prayers are also company them on behalf of us..Thanks you dear Hans...take care always

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Johnny Ferrari 16 December 2016

The images used in this poem make the feelings come very much life, Soul. LIfe seems an alteration of coming and going. Love and friendship is carved deep in our hearts and souls. Beautiful poem, bro

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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2016

I appreciate every words from you Johnny. i always feel like even our hearts made of gold, without ones who really appreciate us for who we are, i dont feel what golden feel we may have. As you said love and friendship is everything

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