Monday, July 14, 2008

Even If It's Only For Tonight Comments

Rating: 4.2

We're laying in your truck bed,
Looking at the sky.
You are in your uniform,
That's when I start to cry.
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Jessica Beal
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Rachel Smailliw 21 July 2008

Golly! You think you need my help? ! ? ! you write about things that matter to like I swear everyone! and when you write it it's like full of truth and power in many ways. great job!

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Stone Granite 14 July 2008

A strong and passionate poem, much like the brave young man you shall miss ever so. Although he is brave, so are you to stand with him in this dangerous journey. May you both find strength and wellness through it.

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Dislocated Heart 14 July 2008

wow.. that is a really really nice poem you wrote.. amazing.. i like this poem.. keep writing!

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