Even If Broken Comments

You both have to be working on the same page and appreciate what each of does. Very thoughtful poem.

Two people can share the same space in life yet their lives can be so different...nively done Annette

The need to know. Nice work.

I love this excellent write about a man who lived his life like a prince, his wife did all the work and obeyed his rules while the prince enjoyed himself but he wasted all his money and he and his wife end up broken in different ways! Deep and powerful write!

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

Beautiful poem Lyn. Beautiful presentation in few lines......... Life has boundaries Rules Even if broken. To assist in Survival When Broken Life has certain rules to be followed by both to make a good family. Some love to live on their ways, even if they break ones heart. Beautiful poem. Loved it.