Thursday, March 23, 2017

Eve Sees Ed. Ed Seeds Eve. ….. [not ‘'suitable' For Children Under 6; Sex! ; Early ‘mankind'; One-Syllable Poem; Very Short] Comments

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Eve sees Ed.
Eve 'eyes' Ed.
Eve's wet.
Ed's wet.
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Bri Edwards
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2022

Extremely well penned. Thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 07 April 2017

From Creation to Copulation and from Consummation to Conception................ the whole cycle in a few words (though you cannot call it mono syllabic, as 'enter' has two syllables) ....... However Masterful Delivery!

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B.m. Biswas 26 March 2017

I read it and enjoy it..... not so easy to write...... fine.

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Annette Aitken 26 March 2017

Eeeeee laddie I like it......; -)

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Mj Lemon 23 March 2017

The power of just one vowel! Potent poetry, my friend, Potent poetry.

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Douglas Scotney 23 March 2017

I just used 'pet' in a poem Bri: 'What Next? ' And also 'easy'.

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