Tuesday, June 7, 2016

Eve's Relevant Secrets Comments

Rating: 5.0

the relevant secrets elude me
the tree of life and knowledge
alas banned for unknown motives
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 09 June 2016

A wonderful poem and a beautiful graphic to complement it. Enjoyed reading. It's a great theme to write on n it's amazing that you have written it from a woman's point of view.10

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Barry Middleton 09 June 2016

Thanks very much Nosheen. I have always felt that Eve got a bad rap. Glad you liked the poem.

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Dimitrios Galanis 08 June 2016

Βarry dear. This is really a great poem.It sounded me as an apocalypse.Just note a few commentary words for me on the last stanza.Do you refer to Aphrodite, the apple[' s kiss] to the most beautiful or....

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Barry Middleton 08 June 2016

Perhaps a better answer is that I see Eve's apple and Aphrodite's golden apple as the same apple basically. And Eve and Aphrodite as the same woman or goddess.

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Dimitrios Galanis 08 June 2016

Βarry dear. This is really a great poem.It sounded me as an apocalypse.Just note a few commentary words for me on the last stanza.Do you refer to Aphrodite, the apple[' s kiss] to the most beautiful or....

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Barry Middleton 08 June 2016

I identify Eve with the goddess element and with Aphrodite but this poem is really all about Eve.

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Alexandro Johns 07 June 2016

A great poem for Eve. Congratulations

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Barry Middleton 07 June 2016

Thanks. I am very glad you liked it.

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Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

It's a very poignant poem from a Woman's angle. how much suffering has this story caused throughout the ages. i prefer goddesses myself! A very fine and thoughtful poem, Barry.

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Barry Middleton 07 June 2016

Thanks Tom. I don't know how I missed posting it here before. It was on facebook before.

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