Eve’s Apple Comments

Beautifully crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.

Prose, poetry, essay, free-style, haiku, senyru, sestina, tanka....What's the difference...a few principles...It's all about Poetics, and this is a fine display of it! Smooth, crisp & well fluxed, Maria. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

it happens to happen as when relished heart when reasons to believe the truth by wisdom...............yet a superb poem, i do enjoy imagery and the text, well penned 10/10, thanks for sharing

hmmmmm! maria rose... i am woman hear me roar! am i readin' this wrong or is there a little bit of 'womans lib' in this piece? a fine piece of prose imho...

That is so daring! You have guts.

Eve's apple opened the demarcation between good and evil, had it not been offered to Adam men could not have gained wisdom! A 10.

maria, really i admire ur poem.....great imagery & is mythical......anyway Eve is lucky....thanku for sharing ur idea with us.... sarah

So realistic, wonderful and exicting

Maria, you strike me as a woman who is no man's fool. I enjoyed your cleverly penned poem. Thanks