~ Eve Niv ~ Comments

really excellent lines...fantastic work hands off... »so close«

Excellent use of language and metaphors. The hypnotic use of Eve Niv keeps it on ones mind.

Your diction is hidden from my eyes. But I think you are a substance.

A great poem in your own inimitable style! Some may feel it a little difficult to understand the real significance.

Again a great poem full of wisdom and depth. Another feather to your cap. Innovative and vivid. A thought provoking write.

In this poem all the poetic devices, performance and endeavors are at the service of the poet's meaning. I think the choice of Eve is very important to find this work more beautiful. But the poet tried to tell us a story of these days using the images of these days and mixing it with the story of the creation. In this poem the personality of the poet as a woman is completely manifested and the poet shows her pride and power as a woman and I think it is what all women need to have about themselves. The diction of this poem like other poems of Nivedita is wonderful and she follows her own style of writing poems. Thanks for sharing and hope more success in your poetic endeavor.

From : Sisirachandra Vaduge (Badulla Sri Lanka; Male; 44) To : Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Date Time : 11/11/2010 10: 56: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : poem Eve ~ Niv Best wishes your poem eveniv is an exceptional poem that I have ever read, it seems sentimental pains and experiences of this bougsostic society and it's[human]inhibitants actions and reactions for sentiments and romance estimated by materials and changing fashions however still I feel difficult to understand if it is it please if any thing wrong or misplet guisde me to understand them too. regards sisira c, v, from srilanka.

excellent poem, good rhythm and conveying best message. god bless u.10/10

I like this poem, Niv. I don’t read it as being intrinsically about you so much as it is a suggestion to others on how to keep their love relationships fresh and exciting by giving them variety in their relationship experiences with one another. It’s very good.

Wooow..this is my third comment in your poetry EVE NIV. what else should i'say. Poetry is expression of the heart possibly never feel the pain if it would be difficult to write poetry full of tears. How i'could write poetry like your poetry joyful. Because my heart is always cloudy. You are nice poet keep always in fun 10/10

Absolute joy to read, so musical as the words jumped off the page. Kind of reminded me almost of a retro 60's feel. I have to say you have such a control of words that mesmerizes your readers. Great write.

Smart Street n’ Hip Hop Cute n’ Tip Top Vintage n’ Trendy Blossoming BrunetteBlondie Your a Blossoming Brunette Blondie with a heartfelt appeal to men to love for real :) A street smart positive woman with an agenda of needed love care consideration for all. And when we dropp the attitudes masks walls of indifference and try a little kindness love hope the world around us blossoms for all. Love is still 'All We Need' :)

Universal goodness reflects the whole of conjugal journey. EVE NIV is the personification simply of an idea....not a person. Thank you for crafting unreal to taste it through the real form of words with rhythm. Regards, 10 again pra..nab

a pleasure to read i found pleasant music in this poem......and i used the dictionary too so plz plz write with hard language to let me learn MS.Niv =) ....haha i love your poetry! ! ! ! thanks for sharing

He miss your poetry was good for the verse to two that was the love not at random love, because i'did not know with the train of thought every poets, when wrote the poem was the contents from the head, about what he think and i'knew how your thoughts were wrote something simple but that made different only his words that was full of riddle made me turned the brain continued. Good of you 10/10

It spreads my smyle, you wrap your I AM into the most tender language to appeal to others to start loving themselves IMMEDIATELY. Thanks

I love this poem. I personally believe, we have to love ourselves for others to love us. By then taking it one step forward means speaking out about how beautiful we as peoples are and thats where this poem makes it for me. Thanks for sharing

I liked the first verse from this poem to sell the woman and about global birds afterwards in coloured with very good composition chemistry. Well....+10

you are good painter of life, your words never fail to draw reality onto a canvas of life... you not use a visible color but tangible feeling to your painting, that's make it valuable... most of your poem just like the 'Picasso drawing in form of poem'...10, enjoyable to read

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