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Footsteps. Whispers. Silence... A stylish writing which only Jacqui can do. Words used in the poem are simple yet lucid. Outwardly it looks normal poem But if you read twice then You can find beauty in it. Awesome poem by fellow poetess. Great going, Carry mantle of your lovely work with a smile and in style..............10+++++++++++++ Rating!

Hmm, very interesting. I like the expression of internal turmoil here, though I do encourage the exploitation of temptation. To take what one wants, is the greatest victory, so long no one gets hurt! Lovely writing.

It's a nice poem, excellent write, , But always there's a vulpine serpent, waiting for entice us to erode the forbidden fruit...