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In the beginning the world was great, the creation was good,
But something was missing in Adam's neighborhood.
The heavenly sky was a perfect blue, the air pure and sweet,
What else could man wish what more could he need?
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yes the beauties of this world cannot be enjoyed alone so God presented Man with a Woman.....and thus began the progeny of man...yout poem is full of exotic imagery...and fine composition.......
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7/30/2025 4:49:56 PM # 1.0.0
A great rhythmic poem and a very well composed theme. It is true, woman adds beauty and charm to life. Perhaps, this is why she is the better half. Thank you for sharing. CP