Eve Comments
the serpent
had to crawl
on its belly
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Hi Rachel, Clever and humorous… worded just right with strong cues for imagination… I saw the snake and Eve crawling on their bellies. Vivid imagery. Loved it! Thanks Deva
I agree. Life is not fair especailly to women and children. Even in those countries where they say that men and women are equal, the practices don't reflect this.
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Hi Rachel, Clever and humorous… worded just right with strong cues for imagination… I saw the snake and Eve crawling on their bellies. Vivid imagery. Loved it! Thanks Deva