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Lovely! When truth penetrates….” Your solemn belief itself.. become the truth for yourself… Krishna Baalu

begin the primitive carving with stones...wow!

yet another masterpiece-- sterling qualityXXXX10 love anju

When A.R.Rahman set music the lyrics are immetirial. when you write a poem it subject is immaterial. i love the flow, i love the words and i love your skills.

evade the caverns of existence And begin the primitive carving with stones............... oh what a wonderful flow of words breeze of spring when whispers to ear...fantastic appeal, a dazzling glow in deep darkness, night swells up by the gleams of images, great write i do admire,10+++, thanks for sharing

a superb write indeed almost i can relate it to myself...thanks for sharin semma ji 10++++

An emphatic write...philosophic intellectual mystic...this evasion is a self inflicted punishment we often choose 10

This is kind of crisis intellectuals often get into. So beautifully penned full of excellent rhymes; mellowed tone............10

Don't evade from reality.......but fantasy and dream are just a stone throw.Well done Seema.

wow! truely an artwork! chosen words are fine! captivating verses! ....10++