Monday, January 13, 2003

Evans Comments

Rating: 3.4

Evans? Yes, many a time
I came down his bare flight
Of stairs into the gaunt kitchen
With its wood fire, where crickets sang
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Ronald Stuart Thomas
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NEED HELP! ! ! 27 August 2020

Can someone explain the dislocation in this line " It was the dark Silting the veins of that sick man I left stranded upon the vast And lonely shore of his bleak bed."

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mark 13 April 2021

As the Autoplay shows, this poem is full of said dislocations... Maybe it's a hint to the fact that Evans, as a hill-farmer was isolated from the community. More probably though, it's a metaphor for the fact that the poet-priest was there to perform the last rights to the deceased.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 May 2019

It was not the dark filling my eyes And mouth appalled me, not even the drip" . Outstanding style of narration that is touching too.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 May 2019

It was not the dark filling my eyes And mouth appalled me; not even the drip Of rain like blood from the one tree Weather-tortured. a fine poem full of emotions. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 May 2019

Upon the vast! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2019

It was not the dark filling my eyes And mouth appalled me; not even the drip Of rain like blood from the one tree Weather-tortured. It was the dark.....so moving. Beautiful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 29 May 2019

The deftly created scene looks as if taken from a suspense thriller. Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 May 2019

One of the best poems by Ronald Stuart Thomas............

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