Saturday, April 23, 2016

- Evanescent Her Glance Comments

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The mirror's images, imbuing, fade
preceding instances, thο', reproduce,
our autumn photographs the rain conveyed,
a soughing message, fated to diffuse.
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Georgios Venetopoulos
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Unwritten Soul 12 June 2016

Wow...the work is so beautiful, the arrangement and the way it goes line by line was beautiful :) It just beautiful

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Valia Maistrou 27 April 2016

...The stunning usage of sophisticated British language (i.e. bequeathed, betrothal, beguile, thud, perchance, e'er) and the techninal means of consonance as of c (preceding instances to reproduce) and b (The past bequeathed me betrothal shield) in accordance with the tamed, tightly linked Iambic pentameter and dulcet rhyme are resulting to a unique euphony in this beautiful gem of Pure English Poetry! As we've been accustomed to the Poet's film directing like talent, lyric pictures of a lovely couples' dynamic love affair that has been quitted and remained in the past in the process of time are being built in a fascinating way!

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Thank you, Valia!

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Georgios Venetopoulos

Georgios Venetopoulos

Athens, Greece
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