(#) Evanescent Comments

Good strong write Candice...nice flow running through it...thank you...10++

a great poetic language, with a very nice title...truly remarkable piece...Great frame work..10+++

plasma...changed to chlorophyll

A poem sublime..excellent..great10

this is an engrossing piece for me... i even tried dissecting it. :) you have a very strong first stanza. if this poem is itself a leaf, that part is the petiole. it brings in the purest blood... for strength... some movement in the middle, while at the opposite end is aptly the last stanza, a stronger utterance of desperation... but even that is easily invalidated by the first. excellent.