(#) Evanescent Comments
A remaining leaf
resisting to fall.
Its vein has the purest
blood. Unruffled
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a great poetic language, with a very nice title...truly remarkable piece...Great frame work..10+++
this is an engrossing piece for me... i even tried dissecting it. :) you have a very strong first stanza. if this poem is itself a leaf, that part is the petiole. it brings in the purest blood... for strength... some movement in the middle, while at the opposite end is aptly the last stanza, a stronger utterance of desperation... but even that is easily invalidated by the first. excellent.
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7/27/2025 2:24:28 PM # 1.0.0
Good strong write Candice...nice flow running through it...thank you...10++