Thursday, March 12, 2009

Evanescence Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The light sparkled on the glass in your hand.
For a moment, I turned away,
and,
like the light,
...
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Diana van den Berg
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Yelena M. 18 March 2009

Simple and perfect..Or simply perfect :)

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Alison Cassidy 13 March 2009

You capture that which cannot be captured - with perfection and soul. Your final line adds a touch of humanity that is quite brilliant. Superb penning. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Roshni D'Souza 12 March 2009

Perfectly complete...just as it is! Thanks!

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Fiona Davidson 12 March 2009

Wonderful short write Diana...says everything...10++

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Diana van den Berg

Diana van den Berg

Durban, South Africa
Diana van den Berg
Diana van den Berg
Durban, South Africa
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