Saturday, January 2, 2016

Evanescence Comments

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O fleeting love, like a wisp of smoke!
You drift away leaving me bereft of sensibilities;
Ever in the blues.
Love! The potion to give life to life,
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Ngimchule Nampeung
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Dev Anand 02 May 2016

Love! The potion to give life to life, Robbed forever from me. In the sea of woes, I weep; ....this is a great poem. your use of words is marvelous. thank you dear poetess. dev

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Learnmore Edwin Zvada 04 January 2016

Lovely!

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Ngimchule Nampeung 05 January 2016

Thank you!

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 January 2016

In the sea of woes, I weep; Bemoaning the love lost in the labyrinth of ephemeral passion. Like a foetus, I lay; my cry of anguish unheard. very nice use of words in this poem. you are bringing in lot of thoughts which is worth pondering. do not be sad or depressive. you are going to win and conquer. tony

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Ngimchule Nampeung 03 January 2016

Thank u so much, Tony for your uplifting words.Thank goodness I am past that phase now.

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