Evading Tears Comments

The passion and pain, tears and falling rain have all been put together beautifully. Keep writing, you have a real talent.

Julie (or Jules, as I like to call you) - This is a fantastic poem and is indicative of your talents as a poet. For starters, the title is awesome. Your brightness is gradually changed by the feelings that forever loom within you, only to become more desperate with each subsequent realization. It is the desperation I seem to be transfixed by. Simply put, it is awesome. A 10! ! Stone

Nice poem expressing passion, though sad yet captivating! High marks.