Saturday, November 5, 2011

Euthanasia Comments

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I've wasted your time,
now your time doth waste me,
I often deem my hate for you,
upon mundane fears of losing sight.
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Stan Petrovich 07 November 2011

CL, I love you, but have a difficult time with the admixture of archaic words you use. If it is your chosen style, so be it. All I really mean is that it throws me off a bit; but what is there is always frosting on as cake, a handsome bit of meaningful decor, and always rife with meaning and glorious taste-temping fruit....

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Lenore Lee 06 November 2011

Hmmm, if the person you are talking about takes you is that truly euthanasia? Isn't that murder? Or were you referring to an emotion taking you over? Either way this was dark and chilling, which is what you meant it to be right? !

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Benjamin Paa Willie 06 November 2011

Awesome words and wonderful style. Great work! 10

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