Euphony Of Myself Comments

love for poem.. all i can say is you rhyme every poem in your way.. and felt something different... nice work :)

PS, Joseph - You do use lots of imagery - just edit your work more. I think you should make this shorter and it will work. Also, please eliminate all prose from your poetry. As when you say, I have no god, no love, no hobby - poetry is all. That is not really poetry. I am sorry to be blunt but I went to a workshop where we were told to be honest and point out what was what we liked and not. The first few lines of the poem were really promising....so make the rest of the poem like that. There is much that I like in this poem - but there is much that needs to be cut and you will have a strong poem. Trust me. :)

Well, I found you, a different way. I think you have potential as a poet. I think it would be helpful for you to think more in terms of using imagery and simile. Good luck! Judith

Speechless! Security and wisdom breathe through your well penned and poignant writes! It is a great pleasure to read and enjoy such a thought provoking write from a young writer like you! This amazing write clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more of your moving and touching writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...