Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Eturnal Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The deadly forces that cast their shadows
On these ghostly hollows
Calling to my essence
a glimpse of a presence
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Celene Bonin
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Dove Allen 04 August 2010

A beautiful, haunting poem of lost lovers reunited! Your usage of colorful words illustrates a picture of a woman's soul yearning for the touch of her beloved once more. A dream perhaps? Fine example of a love poem!

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