Storm
So strong,
I need to
Brave your vileness,
...
Read full text
It's not so easy to compose Etheree because it needs to scale syallables as per the lines. You are doing it wonderfully me friend. Here, the syllabic pattern: 1-2-3-5-5-6-7-8-9-10. So nice except a little deviation in line 4...5 stars
A beautiful poem, dear Bernard on storm in Etheree pattern. Well done..Top stars