Tuesday, May 25, 2021

Etheree In Storm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Storm
So strong,
I need to
Brave your vileness,
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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A beautiful poem, dear Bernard on storm in Etheree pattern. Well done..Top stars

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 May 2021

It's not so easy to compose Etheree because it needs to scale syallables as per the lines. You are doing it wonderfully me friend. Here, the syllabic pattern: 1-2-3-5-5-6-7-8-9-10. So nice except a little deviation in line 4...5 stars

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

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