Etheree In Storm Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion
Etheree In Storm
Storm
So strong,
I need to
Brave your vileness,
Your violent wind
Almost knocks my life down.
The heavy rains you carry
Terribly flood my surroundings,
So I keep my head above water,
Weathering your surge as long as I can.
It's not so easy to compose Etheree because it needs to scale syallables as per the lines. You are doing it wonderfully me friend. Here, the syllabic pattern: 1-2-3-5-5-6-7-8-9-10. So nice except a little deviation in line 4...5 stars
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9/11/2025 4:17:28 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem, dear Bernard on storm in Etheree pattern. Well done..Top stars