Monday, July 8, 2019

Ethereal Egg Comments

Rating: 4.9

Might it be a pool or wishing well
with rainbow ripples round it wound
within an enchanted cosmic dell
of a fabulous world newfound—
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 08 July 2019

Hither and thither creatures may come from this ethereal egg, I especially love the first two stanzas with questions of intrigue, another fascinating poem! ! !

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Harley White 08 July 2019

It is always a pleasure to see your reactions to my poems! So glad you liked it and thanks for another encouraging comment!

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Chinedu Dike 08 July 2019

Really a poignant piece of poetry, well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. An insightful creation elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Harley. Remain enriched.

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Harley White 08 July 2019

It is highly gratifying to know that my poem had such an impact on you, and that my efforts in writing the poem were noted. Thank you very much for your marvelous words!

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