Ethereal Broken Comments

Those eyes can see Whenever lights revealed on me If it can be learned by you too Or telling you i am a survivor Of life reality tales My ethereal broken I chose to follow the light So my soul, keep my life blue Oh God, I know you lead me, so true.......touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

Those eyes can see. Thanks for sharing.

Darkness can surround us at times and it can cause us to lose our way. We may grope for awhile but eventually we will take hold to something that will lead us towards the light. A nice write Soul.

we're on the right track when we chose to follow the light / 'tis an excellent poem! ! ! !

woah.... what a poem. masterpiece indeed. great work.

Enjoy and dance there is morning not far look

Mistakes will remain as scars It wont fade and i wont hide Those eyes can see Whenever lights revealed on me nice read soul! ...how aesthetically geometrical, and symmetrical you compose... yes, towards the light!

But it is an intellectual exercise with something to share and I don`t feel it is that boring..

A long epic journey through self ends on faith in light and trust in God and you are the 'survivor of life's reality tales'. I wonder how your pen keeps on going weaving one theme.

yes i do agree soul of poetry. beautiful write.

An epic write as I see it as the years condemn for us all thru the dark the answer lies in your last line... Oh God, I know you lead me, so true and he will and I know you know it...regards

Bad things always happens to us.how we repomd or what would be our respond to them, makes our charachter and the quality of our lives..we can wait under these permanent darkness and carry our wounds and tears with us.we can sit under the heavy perpetual halo of darkness which has immobilized our lives and we can not do anything untill the end of our lives by these losses and the gravity doesnt let us do anything OR we can rise again from these losses and conquer our destiny.we can rise again from our pains and forget our past and scars.and use the scars as a reminder.we can rise again from the best gift we have been gifted and that is LIFE itself.we must invoke during hard times to bury our disappointments. now i am writing these words i wonder that is it me that say these words? hahaha anyway i love darkness.so do these wonderful poem.(you know i love the one with dark theme) .although i see hope and light or the hope for the hope.and this is itself brightness. hosanna that we have ourselves to share our pains and not hide our scars.~nb

Your agony, dilemma and your conclusion not to yield, to fight back to stay in your brighter soul- - - all are woven skillfully.Love!

The darkest hour is just before dawn - emerging from darkness into the light. Great write Soul.

Without darkness there can be no light, without sorrow no joy but there, like a beacon, is always hope. A lovely poem with great depths 10/10 BB : O)

Learn how to dance again can be after we learn to walk again. great balls of fire.

Mistakes will remain as scars It wont fade and i wont hide Those eyes can see Whenever lights revealed on me If it can be learned by you too Or telling you i am a survivor Of life reality tales My ethereal broken I chose to follow the light So my soul, keep my life blue Oh God, I know you lead me, so true....yeap God examines us by many trials & tribulations, one who faces these with courage & patience, indeed have a right to called hero, a hero learns through trials & considers God a perfect learner.to think over past time again & again increase ur pain more as u said, As reminding the pain, mistakes lesson to learn again.. its our attitude towards situation that ruins our life, not a situation, The broken angel that rise from black stained heart New heart that numb with feelings, and forgotten life meaning wao...great poem as we have a lot to learn t...u r brilliant soul | Delete this message

Lifes rich tapestry takes us sometimes to very dark places and hope enables us to return to the light. The hooe of something better deep in our soul.