Monday, November 26, 2018

Eternity To Enjoy It Comments

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I barely notice the horse as he walks,
his gait is so incredibly smooth,
we've been riding all morning on this ridge,
and have settled down into a nice groove.
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David Welch
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Rajnish Manga 26 November 2018

Great poem. You are an amazing story teller, David. Thanks for sharing. To quote a few lines: and the only thing that was on my mind were thoughts of that bath, whiskey, and a shave, so we rode on down to Centerline.

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Practicing Poetess 26 November 2018

Had goosebumps by the 5th & 6th stanzas, and tears in my eyes by the end- - Great writing, David! Thoroughly enjoyed!

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