Sunday, November 15, 2009
Eternity Sleep - Ii Comments
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I'm partial scared, partial alone
my faith on faith is almost gone
I gave myself to all His Might
but my might is still singing
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Ashraful Musaddeq
21 November 2009
Don't write like that Sarkar, it touches like an ice-knife! Good luck...
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Sandra Fowler
16 November 2009
Very touching lines, Asif. So full of pathos. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra
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7/28/2025 6:02:42 AM # 1.0.0
I agree with Sandra. It's so full of pathos. Your poems and words are not meaningless. They will continue to live. Cheer up, Asif. Naseer