Eternity Sleep - I Comments

I enjoying your poems so far great work on this piece but I agree with Karin they are sad and depressing but really great poems lol 10/10

I like how you said you would hold the moon in your hands, where most would say the world. Oneday I will drown in my own tears floodout pain which lives inside good lines... this is a enjoyable read. good job. Becca

very nice and catchy title. enjoyed.

I am sure that this 'someday' will come... all I can wonder is how longer will stay... This is the mistery of hapinness/sadness.... Bigger is one, biggest is another... Lovely poem honey! Thanks for sharing! ! !

a dream of eternity is a dream of life after death...... thank you of reminding me that.....death is an eternity to linger on.....everybody has to under go death in his or own time...... what a lovely poem you wrote....God bless

A very lovely poem. u get 10++...............

if only there was an eternity sleep-- who knows about the future soooooooo live life to its full now in the shadow of the Lord. Forget your woes---theres nothing eternal or eternity, whilst we are on this earth only our good human values count--and our good works. our brother feelings and love for one another. One more nice write from you Asif and ++++++10 regards anjali. (Heres Eid Mubarak to you and your family)