The wings were struggling
On a leaden sky,
Distorting the space and time
Sinusoidally...
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silence is the best answer to every question..a very nice poem!
In everyday life, we're often confused; life makes many demands on us; we generally live superficially, under the spell of may illusions. But love and the silence of which you speak give us the strength to keep going and attain to glimpses of the divine. Good poem. If you have time, please read 'Dante and His Three Beatrices' and 'The Epileptic Fit'.
The Book of Genesis tells us that God created all things from eternal silence and nothingness! We meditate in silence to get closer to Him, since He resides deep within our silent being! Thanks for your thought provoking poem! 10! -Raj
nice presentation of desire and what a lovely desire to be with one....great poem
agreed.. yes, the eternity of silence is like what you expressed here.. let me say... voices go fad out, lights turn off, breathes stop out, life ends of but the silent stay for ever... yeah..you wrote this poem very sweet way..loved it and really a sweet and great one...well done..10/10
The great symphony of life....you've very rightly said it....nice reading....thank you
From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
The poem is beautifully penned, as usual. -Eternity of silence+++.
I need to save myself from me....., who doesn't, marieta...? ? ? Right you are; silence seems to be the answer........oherwise, the phrases...silence is bliss....silence is gold....., why, what for? ? A thought provoking poem, dear.....
You give me the necessary strength, So much desired, to continue The great symphony of life.........beaitiful presentation of desire and what a lovely desire to be with one....great poem....10 read mine come home..... home bound....no separate ways....divorce
Congratulations, dear poet Ms Maglas. This poem is listed at #30 among the Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter. Well done