Saturday, July 21, 2012

Eternity Means Forever Comments

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Have I been living too long in this world I was born into or
Am I struggling to come to terms with my life in a fabricated world, as I hear
Voices of many I have never heard before interrupted by
The reproaching voices of my mother and of my father?
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Claudia Krizay
Voices father pink purple rainbow Mountains Expectations
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Lamont Palmer 21 July 2012

This was an interesting read, despite some of the trite lines. Could benefit from a few rewrites, but its essentially a good poem. -LP

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Claudia Krizay

Claudia Krizay

Washington DC
Claudia Krizay
Claudia Krizay
Washington DC
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