Friday, December 18, 2020
Eternity Is But A Moment Comments
Rating: ★4.5
It was a late springtime day, and the bluebirds all were singing,
Outside the classroom window, while the bells all were ringing.
I had a lucky window seat, which afforded quite amazing views,
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7/27/2025 5:11:33 AM # 1.0.0
Some interesting philosophical concepts expressed in the poem which I thought was enjoyable to read. However, it seems the answers given to the questions asked in the poem are those of the writer as the subjects being dealt with here are too profound to express in the way they could otherwise deserve to be treated. Also, the meter and rhyming scheme of such a poem could be improved to be really much more impressive. Thanks for sharing.
You are quite welcome. I am so glad you enjoyed my cosmic tale of adventure. As to the other part of your comment, the answers to the questions that were posed in the story are the same as what experts and astronomers have to say on the subjects, except for the final question, which no one can know, but I do consider the answer provided to that question to be a pretty good guess. The story is a fantasy.