Sunday, October 1, 2017

Eternity Before My Eyes Comments

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Little by little, an old
timeless shine
burns in the skyline.
There is a sunset brighter than gold.
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Marcondes Pereira
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2017

white clouds were kissed by the sunlight, while our blue sky, and the orange line they fuse themselves! A show so divine! Cosmic colours are annoucing the coming night... loved these lines. It is a beautiful poem on nature having stunning expression. Thank u dear Marcondes for sharing this gem.

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Marcondes P 03 October 2017

I am really glad that you liked my poem so intensely, dear Kumarmani. I tried to describe the beauty of nature with a mix between softness and intensity. Thank you for your kind feedback.

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