Sunday, December 16, 2007

Eternity And Beyond Comments

Rating: 5.0

As one when smooched
by the love of the truth
yet being embraced
as redness to the blood
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Dr subhendu kar
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'as the trust of love dazzles blue when the love is spruced by the trust as being bestowed upon as gleams by the truth of the love as divine and the river flows as the love' Great coinage! ! Tidily and comfortably ten dr. sakti

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Ewigi Liebe 17 December 2007

Such wonderment from wint'ry surd, Soliloquy's mere tune.Grand jubilance in summer's heard -Uncommon sounds the loon.Bespeckled pinions, grace in flight, Resplendent is her plume.Bemusing splash to see her light Cavort about the flume.

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Chris Mendros 16 December 2007

Beautiful, strong depiction of the power of love. Excellent work.

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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